Design is communication

Tip #1

Always use the simplest word available

Tip #2

Try saying it out loud and then write it down

Tip #3

Be as succinct as possible and take new sentences often

Advice

There’s a problem > That affects people in negative way > i am working on this new thing > which has the power to solve this problem

Intro - who are you?

Hook - what is opportunity / problem?

Line - How do u seize/solve it?

Sinker - Why does this matter, how does it create value?

Ask - Gauge their response, would they like to hear more or repeat anything

Elevator pitch